Post by Deleted on Nov 12, 2013 16:42:37 GMT -5
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Post by P✿pple on Nov 12, 2013 23:55:36 GMT -5
To create PCs, post hereIf you notice your code is missing from the lists, please post it on the Directory thread.JOLTIC IS MISSING IT"S ABILITY After creating your PC, add your PC and Profile to your Mini-Profile by following the steps below Click on Profile either at the top of the page beside "Home" or click on your Name right above your Avatar. Go to Edit Profile Click on Personal Scroll down and under signature you will find Profile and PC You can fill these area's in using [url= ]Text[/url] All that we ask is to Keep the Text short
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Post by Slate on Nov 13, 2013 14:50:23 GMT -5
Alright, still some work to be done. First off, Joltik needs a gender, and Rion's personality falls short of the 150 word count. Moving on from that....
I am a bit confused by the bit regarding his Seviper. We had spoken in the cbox about it at length, and I had been under the impression that you understood mutations of this kind are usually detrimental at best - there would be no RP advantages, and the six eyes (most of which would likely be nonfunctional with his normal two just that, normal, if not worse off) would be the limit. I had given you the go ahead for those, not the additional fangs which would lend definite combat advantages, and most definitely not the toxic blood. All of those will need to be removed, and just to clarify since I don't want to make the same mistake again by possibly being unclear, as I accept that may have been my fault - the additional eyes will either not work or barely be able to see, with the two normal eyes that all Seviper have being just that, normal. Beyond that, Poison types cannot be poisoned - indeed, most tend to thrive in toxic environments, so you'll probably need a new explanation. I did say that this would probably take some work to make acceptable.
Finally, the history should probably be expanded on a bit - it seems to be entirely focused around the acquisition of the Pokemon. Finally, while we allow "original" regions to be used in character histories, it needs to be referred to as "Unknown". That, or you could simply choose one of the six canon regions as we do have characters here from Kalos - that's six different countries and four to five continents to pick from.
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