JC Bass
Aug 31, 2013 22:09:55 GMT -5
Post by Deleted on Aug 31, 2013 22:09:55 GMT -5
[/font] [/b]Joshua Scott Bass Alias: Well mhmmm the ladies call me -whips hair- BassAge: 19 Gender: Male Sexual Orientation: Heterosexual Region: Unknown Class: Coordinator Occupation: Popstar Rank Lead Singer [/ul] APPEARANCE[/b] [/ul] PERSONALITY[/b]Jc is a sly man; very sly. He usually cares for most living things and treats everything as one. Though he just makes girls superior to some things. This being said he is a very woman wowing guy. Always trying to impress the ladies and get their attention. Mostly by singing or dancing hell even his good looks. He loves pokemon; he is always trying to get a new pokemon of his liking. Zangoose is also like a brother to him; they been together since day 1. Zangoose is usually out of his pokeball all the time and even helps perform sometimes. He is the persay mascot of Z'Sync. Besides Zangoose Bass is a very active guy always doing something i mean he is the greatest popstar in region so yeah! You can catch Bass on his off fishing,cooking,or trying to get the ladies wowed. JC is a smiley to; always smiling and messing with his hair. Ambitions: To meet that it girl
[/ul] POKEMON[/b], and if you are importing a rare Pokemon, please place this next to their sprite: Pokedex Name: Zangoose ALIAS: ..... Nu. GENDER: Immunity MOVE SET: X Scisscors | Sword Dance | Crush Claw | Taunt
Pokedex Name: Poochyena ALIAS: ..... Nu GENDER: Male ABILITY: Quick Feet MOVE SET: Bite | Chrunch | Embargo | Assurance [/ul] HISTORY[/b] JC was a very quiet young man starting out. He grew up in a small town called Lakeside. Lakeside was populated with mostly wealthy people. JC had 2 brothers, 1 aiming to be a breeder and the other a Trainer. JC Bass took the last route a coordinator he wanted to perform. JC at a young age loved music; he would dance and try to sing what he could every time his father, a famous piano player, played. Everyone in the town that he had a future in performing. So his parents and friends convinced him to focus his career on performing and the future of his endeavors. So he started taking singing lessons more and more, then took free piano lessons from his father so maybe he could have that talent in his performing career. At the age of 12 he started a boy band for the talent show called “Old Kids on the Block” The name trying to say they are old enough to do what they want and can feel how they want. After that he knew his future was singing and being famous. So he set out and focused on this career.
He took lessons everyday for half of the day. Bass was determined to do this. As 4 years came of hard work the producers finally noticed him at the age of 17; along with a few other boys. They started a boy band, Z’Sync, and they quickly became the heart throbs of all the ladies. They were starting a trend but didn’t know it, as soon more boy bands came. Bass was then recognized to be the lead singer for the band, as the band was on a lead singer roller coaster. This is where he is now, traveling the world, being a teen popstar. What will happen next for this heartthrob![/ul][/ul] OOC INFORMATION[/b] [size=3][b]Jackal[/b][/size] [url=link to accepted application will be added by staff][b]JC Bass[/b][/url] Face claim: [b]unknown[/b] - un, [i]JC Bass[/i] Continuity: Original Other Characters: nupe Role play Sample:Komamura walks around the soul society enjoying the sun warming his fur while walking his dog he got from the human world Goro. " Ahhh what a wonderful day for a walk wouldn't you say Goro?" says Komamura as he takes a deep breath of fresh air. Komamura then looks down at his dog smiling, the dog in turn just turns its head and barks at Komamura happily. "Ha ha ha yes I agree with you Goro there are some interesting smells in the air today" Komamura laughs again then lets out a deep sigh of regret wishing Tosen was still at the soul society and wish he hadn't betrayed them."I wish Tosen was here to enjoy this beautiful day." said Komamura as he thought back to when he and Tosen first met and all the other times they spent together. As Komamura is deep in thought a group of soul reapers pass by, that are from his division. "GOOD DAY CAPTAIN!!" the soul reapers yell together as they bow to their captain, Komamura then comes out of thought and quickly smiles at the group and nods. "Good day." Komamura replies back as the group bow again and keep walking joking and laughing with each other. "Don't be messin around too much!" The wolf captain called after them but he kept his smile. Looking at them as they leave remembering the few minutes of happiness he and tosen shared when he was still here, he then wonders how Hisagi was doing Komamura knew that he hung out with kira and the other lieutenant's, but he knew the betrayal of Hisagi's captain who Hisagi looked up to was hard on him. Komamura then heres barking and looks down at Goro barking at his master angrily because they weren't going nowhere. "Hmmph, lets go see how Hisagi is doing then we'll head home." says Komamura as he and Goro walks towards the 9th division barracks. But as he neared the barracks he stopped short of two people fighting. Quickly making his way over to the two men he yelled. "Whats going on here?" The two men who were fighting quickly stopped and slowly picked themselves off the ground. "He broke something of mine that cost a good deal of money and he won't pay for it!" The first one said but was quickly cut off by the others protests of saying he did not mean too. After listening to both sides of the story and the two trying to argue even further Komamura reached into his pocket and produced money that he gave to the first one. "Here I myself will pay for this since he is from my quad but let me tell BOTH of you. Petty fights like this should not aloud to even happen. You should be men about and talk it over, not fight like you are little kids understand me? You should be ashamed of yourselves acting this way in public. Not only that but fighting with yourselves over objects is uncalled for. Now i want you to immediately head back to your barracks. The both of you now." Stopping the guy from his squad as he left Komamura told him that he would be paying back the money his Taicho had just spent on him. But he also told him that fighting is no reason to try and get out of paying someone for something they did wrong. "You need to amend for your wrongs and not try to avoid them. Now go back to the barracks for now." After watching Komamura petted his dog. "Kids these days...." [/ul]</ul></ul>
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JC Bass
Sept 1, 2013 0:02:14 GMT -5
Post by P✿pple on Sept 1, 2013 0:02:14 GMT -5
Hey Jackal, Welcome to EPOCH youi just need a few edits and fixes to this and it'll be fine.
First on the list, I placed your history back up into your profile and deleted the extra post you made with it. I know Lyro said you could leave it in a separate post but this was due to the idea that it would something substantial. For as brief as it is it does not deserve it's own post.
Secondly, Appearance is 142 words, typically I'd let that slide but given how brief the rest of him is I'm going to have to ask you to meet the site requirements. Personality needs to be un-bolded and re-read as it's very choppy and broken to read with words or typos that are missing or shouldn't be there. Please go back and recheck over your work. The same goes for his history it's choppy and doesn't read smoothly and you can tell that it's rushed. I know you're excited to Rp with him and get him on the board and I understand that it's your 3rd time writing it. Believe me I'd be pissed and throwing in the towel if I lost my work twice in one day. But please give yourself some time to calm down and not worry or rage over thinking you're going to lose something. You have your post up now editing it shouldn't be that hard. But I would suggest copy pasting it into word and making your edits.
You can edit the Bulbasaur images to your chosen Pokemon if you wish. There are links to Sprites under Offsite Services. Your RP sample checks out and you need to Please fill in your Face Claim for the OOC portion of your app. If you do not know who your FC is you can drag and drop the image into Google Images to find out who it is. If nothing comes up you may label them as Original with the artist if you're able to find them.
If you're not quiet sure on how to embellish more on this application feel free to look at any of the accepted characters on the board and that still doesn't give you an idea in the Guidebook under the Application Info tab there are 3 buttons that link you to useful Application building information.
Thank you for taking the time to re-app JC despite the issues you encountered. P❤pple
When you have updated your application, please re-post a link to it in the Mod Summons Shout box.
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JC Bass
Sept 1, 2013 0:31:23 GMT -5
Post by Deleted on Sept 1, 2013 0:31:23 GMT -5
Well i did what was told... little iffy on the history if it's still messed let me know. also like i said i tried to put in images and thecoding went berserk
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